2016考研英语一作文第三段及结尾的具体写作框架—中国教育在线
临近考试,很多考生对考研英语作文的复习很是茫然。在此,教研室推出“2016考研终极写作辅导”系列文章,从作文话题及各个段落的写作框架两大部分来分析,对考生在最后15天内迅速提高写作成绩有一定帮助。
本文主要内容为第三段写作及结尾部分的写作框架。
解析:第三段与结尾部分是整篇文章的总结部分,对于整体来说有点睛和提分的作用。本文提供的框架也分为负向文章行文思路与正向文章行文思路两大类,第三段的总结与提升主要从两个层面(社会层面与个人层面)来分析。
一、第三段开头可以用到的过渡句:
What should we do to release/fix the problem?
Are there any recommendations to solve the problem?
How to cure the pressing situation?
What should we do at present?
+The answer is that all hands are required to (solve the pressing problem/improve the situation.
二、负向文章行文思路:
1、社会层面
(1)中央地方共同努力
The local officials should resort to the law to regulate ( environmental conservation ) . Besides, the central government is not supposed to hand a blank check to the local and should be partially involved in (curbing the local tainted environment).
state government
(2)政府立法听民意
Our government should resort to the law to regulate ( the standard of product quality ) and shall listen to public opinions and demands when formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to (quality of product)
food security/safety
(3)政府直面问题,听民意,平衡两者关系
Our government should not sugarcoat(cover) the problem but listen to public opinions and demands when formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to (09-网络远近the Internet) and
try to juggle ( the use of network and the supervision on it/ control over it )
try to balance between (the use of network and the control over it)
juggle A and B
unfavorable information
balance between A and B
(4)学校提供相关教育
Our colleges are supposed to provide training and course for students to learn how to juggle (03溺爱孩子their physical development and psychological maturity/ 13选择 their study at school and internship outside the campus/off campus) on campus
(5)学校组织
Student Union should start/kick off campaign, both inside and outside the campus(both on and off campus), to educate people that ( 06追星--chasing idol during the youth should be properly handled by their parents. )
(6)媒体
Media can broadcast less commercials and more public service advertisements
to call on parents to ( 03溺爱parent their children properly )
to promote the awareness of (03溺爱 right parenting )