干货|雅思写作同义词替换有妙招!
雅思写作首段,大家都知道需要进行运用同义词或改变构词法来解释主题,如果只是抄袭原来的问题,就会失分。一个好的技巧是通过使用:动词,动名词,形容词或名词来改变词性,看下面的例子。
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使用同义词进行替换
*People increasingly access the news online these days rather than buying newspapers and magazines to find out what is going on in the world.
*There is an increase in people accessing the news online these days rather than buying newspapers and magazines to find out what is going on in the world.
*An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
*The number of people who buy what they need online is on the increase.
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实例练习
参考答案(两个版本):
a) People residing in large urban areas have to deal with a lot of issues in their day to day lives.
b) There are a number of issues that people living in cities have to cope with in their everyday lives.
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实例练习
参考答案(两个版本):
a) The Internet, which is a huge source of knowledge, has created opportunities for people worldwide to study.
b) The world wide web is a massive source of information and has given people the ability to study all over the world.
同义词使用
注意事项
在使用同义词时要小心,因为如果使用不当,会降低你的分数。记住,不是所有的事情都需要被解释,有些单词可以保持不变,只是改写关键词。
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不使用同义词替换
原始版本:
An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
运用同义替换版本:
→ A growing number of people are purchasing what they require on the internet.
此版本并没有把每一个词都复述一遍。People是个难以解释的词,所以在这里并没有改写。如果你的目标分数是6分,那么请记住,不需要替换题目中所有的单词,只需要对关键词进行同义替换。
同义词如下:
Increasing – growing
buying – purchasing
online – the internet
不使用同义替换的版本:
→ The number of people who buy what they need online is on the increase.
这种方法通过词性的变换(buying → buy;increasing → on the increase)适用于同义词汇量不多的同学。
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实例练习
原始版本:
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however , think that change is always a good thing.(建议自行改写,再对比下面答案)
不运用同义词改写版本:
Some people find it preferable to avoid change and always do the same things in their lives, others think that it is good to go through changes.
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实例练习
原始版本:
Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health.
不运用同义词改写版本:
Educating patients about improving their health should be the responsibility of Doctors.
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写作题目改写实战
题目:Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
首段写作版本1:
Some people would argue that educating patients about improving their health should be the responsibility of Doctors. I completely agree with this because many people need advice from a medical expert about healthy eating and exercise, which is crucial for preventing disease.
红色 = 改写题目
紫色 =个人观点
首段写作版本2:
Some people would argue that it ought to be the responsibility of Doctors to instruct patients about improving their well-being. I completely agree because many people need advice from a medical expert about healthy eating and exercise, which is crucial for preventing disease.
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同义替换适用阅读、听力